Slowly, He Closed the Door (Poetry)

  May 14 2008  | Views 662 |  Comments  (50)
Early in the morning A squashy tender kiss He started my new dawn With lots of bliss   His fe... Expand

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  sophizz posted 3 mnths ago

Dear PBS.....

so finally the quill moved you..i m so happy



  sophizz posted 3 mnths ago

Dear Dr. Madhvi

that was a nice n sweet comment..thanks a lot



  promilla posted 3 mnths ago

Hi Sophie

It's really tender and soft like a feather!!

It gently touched my heart.

promilla



  Mrs Muffet posted 3 mnths ago

Hi Sophizz,
 
Such a nice and a soft flow of delicate words .....it was almost like ....staggering around with my hands out in a blind-folded state....yearning to hear more...and more...and more  :-)
Loved it 



  Poonam Mishra posted 3 mnths ago

Hi Sophizz,

You took me to another world... started dreaming with the poem... nice one.

Poonam



  reflector posted 3 mnths ago

sophizz,

The man of your fantasy is just that...A fantasy man...tender, loving, etc etc..in an imaginary world..

Lovely poem..very romantic..

Thanks for the concern..I was driving that time when your message came and made me feel nice and since the network was so terrible and I kept sending the message but it would not go and finally I just wrote one word and it went through.:))) 

reffy




  yash chhabra posted 3 mnths ago

How sweet and touching!!! And pic is equally amazing...Loved it



  Raj Arumugam posted 3 mnths ago

a gem of a  love poem, Sophie 



  poetBittersweet posted 3 mnths ago

As tender as the soft touch of feather!



  Dr Madhvi posted 3 mnths ago

nice, tender, romantic and sad...all at the same time.. loved this one sophy
madhvi





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