Early in the morning
A squashy tender kiss
He started my new dawn
With lots of bliss
His feet like a cat, very silent
Walked across the floor
Without any noise
Slowly, he closed the door
He fondly caught me sleeping,
Totally unaware:
That gentle touch, with his hand,
He brushed away my hair
A naughty smile did cross my lips;
He wondered, what was in my dream
I seem to enjoy it, he thought
Or so that it would smile n beam
He settled beside me
And gazed upon my face
His fingertips,
My lips did it lightly trace
A great way to greet the day
As dawn begins to break,
To have my lover,
With a kiss, help me to awake
I floated up in the sky
Lips in a curved up move,
His soft breath rubbing my face
Flower language with my love
And a sudden jolt
Shook me, I woke up
To find out that it was a dream
My Prince Charming was a myth
I longed that the story was true,
My wizard didn’t exist
Just like another day, my lips were dry
My wizard didn’t exist!
Tears born out of my heart, filled my eyes,
Rolled on my cheeks and reached my lips,
Then suddenly from nowhere a feather form his wings
Flew down to wipe the tear tips!
My lips curved up in ecstasy
“Give me, my love, that loving kiss”
My crystal orbs focused on his
Turning all tear traces to bliss
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Dear Shuvyy
thanks a lot for the nice comments and apprecitation
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Kasang dear
yeah yeah..i have a prince charming...but he lives far away....and i miss him a lot...
wish i meet him soon ...i think i m going to his place soon...
thanks a lot for being here da
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Hi Sofie,
Liked the serenity about your poem with the morning imagery. Nice way to wake up surely with such a dream. I wish I wake up to such dreams too
Very nice and sweetly romantic.
Shuvy
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Hiya Sophi
Prince Charming???? Is he there? If such a person exists, hope you find him....may the crystal orbs bring him to you!
Kasang
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bhavna thanks a lot for the reco dear!!
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Bhavna dear..that was a beautiful comment..loved the way you put it...thanks a lot...
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Kunjubi....
thanks a lot....for the appreciation
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phewwwwwwww... tatzzz schhh a beautifulllll poem,, sohizzz.. whoaaa.. loved itt.. so mch luv,, so mch passion,,so mchhh pain,, so mch lonely,, so mch longing.. alll emotions in one poem.. vryy nice...
d pic is alsooo so nice.. :-)
rgds
Bhavna
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Passion...compassion...vision...Jubilation.And what a frustration..congratulation mkunjubi
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Dear Leena
thanks a lot for the appreciation...just tried to do some dream, fantasy n love work
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