Opulence dear

thanks a lot honey. Its wonderful having you here
so how was your holiday?

Dear Govande

hey first lemme pass my wishes to the new born and sharmila.

that was indeed an intresting point that you have raised. yeah usually under the stars means a night sky. i should have put it as under the invisible stars, coz there are lot of stars even during the day.

anyways will take care of such things in future..thanks for the comment

Mohammad...
that was a wonderful comment..thanks a lot for the appreciation

Dear Bhavna

wow...tat was really really sweet honey...thanks a lot for being here

Hi Sophizz,

A awesome poem! missed it, had been holidaying.  
Cheers,
Opulence.

Sophizz,
Those were very sensitive lines. I like the way you effortlessly play with words.

One point though-I was right into the image of sun & sand, and the next line 'under the stars' kind of changed the channel right from the 'late lunch' time to night. I guess it's because I tend to be technically correct in my imagery (which ,believe me, isn't always a good thing!), any wrong piece of the jigsaw tends to crack the image. I am sure your words reflected your image though...hope I am making sense here....

Govande

 
 The most beautiful couplet in abstract. O ne can not but float with the flow.i love to read it again and over.Would that, i could feel that hands around me.

tat hazzz luv writtenn al ovr thrrrr... phewwwwwwww.. wattt a beauitful poem,, sophizz... loved ittt...  these linesss r tooo guddd... 

I imagine we living on our own clandestine island,
waking up late in each others arms
bathing in a chill fresh water stream,
to lay together in the sun and share expressions of warmth
sharing a lunch of fruit, fish and fresh water clear,
under the stars, napping for a while

cheeriozzz
bhavna

Raj Sir

thanks a lot for being here
support n appreciaiton
for the reco too

the lines capture
an eternity of love, sophie