
The day's work was over
Fagged and wacked, I walked out of that multistoried posh tower
Dark clouds suddenly covered the sky and a lightning struck
And then there was this roaring thunder
A wind rushed blowing the sand
Those big drops of rain started falling from heaven
The leaves of those roadside plants, started blushing in joy
I spread my hands wide on either sides of my body
Raised it to keep it in line with my shoulders
My palms were facing upwards
I stretched them as though to capture all the rain drops
A deep breath escaped my nostrils
The damp air around cuddled my body, burning pinions of passion…
As I inhaled the intoxicating smell of the moist earth
Just receiving those big drops of water under my feet
The fresh wet n warm earthly aroma filled the air
I inhaled the alluring scent inside
It released a freshness that traversed to every cell of my body
I was taken to a mysterious state
I drew a line with my foot into the wet mud, curled my toes inwards
Taking mud between my toes
My eyes saw tantalizing beauty encapsulating me
There was so much to see, so much to feel and so much to enjoy
I closed my eyes, looked up and let out a breath
At that very moment, I felt the drops of rain on my face
Trickling down my skin onto my neck
My palm instantly wanted to capture the drops of water
I tried to hold them, but they trickled down between my fingers.
My clothes stuck to my body as if they were my skin
My wet body ran desires high, kindling intoxication
I could take no more,
It was magically euphoric moment
I opened my eyes a few minutes later,
There were more than a dozen people gaping at me from the parking lot
I kick started my two-wheeler and drove my way, bindas!
The rain had almost stopped when I reached home
I parked my two-wheeler and walked to a tree
Held its low lying branches strongly with my hands
And shook it to feel the remaining drops of the rain!!
It was again a magically euphoric moment
Close
Red honey
women enjoy rains
and Men enjoy women getting drenched in the rains!
howzzat! true nah??
yeah we think alike...now a same pinch for that
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Wow,
we though alike !! thanks for pointing me here. Is it only women who think of rain and react like this or do men do too ! it would be really good to read a man's perspective.
this was spooky....even the words were alike our thoughts. hehehee
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Antonie...i worte this on a horrible sumemr day...wishing that it would rain.....
thanks a lot for the appreciation
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ah... amidst this horrible summer and not to mention the stil more horrible global warming stuff ur post was absolutely chilling .... loved reading em.....
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anjaline.....wow...thanks a lot dear....
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Well done! I have experienced exactly something like this and wow, so well-captured feeling of the moment.
love,
a
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kunjubi.....if u r a guy u cant reach me...or say cant even see me from far...if u r a lady then you have some chances...now-a-day i find ladies are smarter n intelligent!



the rain with me...is far from vision...mebbe only in ur dreams
lol...
thanks for being here and all the aprreciation....
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sofizz.....I am immersed in that same euphoria, u were enjoying that day, by reading this wonderful poem. Lovely! Wish i was there with you in that soaking rain. so naturally illustrated in words.. Congrats. U are a genius.. cheers... kunjubi
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Supriya dear...hows u man...had a blast?....muuaah for being here dear!
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Cheti....
how nice it is to scare people....
lol...i get a unique pleasure when people are scared of me
but unfortunately...no one gets scared!
i wish to add beauty to everything...lol
i think i m greedy here
or expecting some miracle?!
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